lunes, 13 de mayo de 2013

essay alternative vs traditional medicine.

                 Alternative Or Traditional?
 

alternative medicine are diferent to traditional medicine,however people prefer traditonal medicine because have a lot of things that alternative no.

alternative medicine works wiht charlatans because the doctors are not certificated,can be much economic  but is more dangerous and harmful,however if you need something faster but unpatented is yours decision and your chlidren,as a result of this medicine a lot of people says that alternative medicine is very harmful and durable for your body and also have to go to the traditional medicine to repair the error of the alternative medicine.

traditional medicine is more expensive than alternative medicine but is more recomendable and has certified doctors,his clean and secure than alternative medicine have insurance for your comfort and credibility a consequently of the alternative medicine the traditional medicine have to Failures by the charlatans of alternative medicine.if you dosn't trus in the alternative medicine in traditional medicine can.

traditional is better than alternative medicine, because it has certifie foctor and the alternative have charlatans the alternative have a precarious condition and traditional is clean and safety,if you have a problem wiht the traditional medicine you can have a insurance but if you select the alternative and you have a problem the problem is yours.

the people says that the alternative is good but sometimes makes problems to your health other people says that traditional medicine is expensive but can be expensive but is more secure and better to your health.

traditional medicine is more expensive but better and safety and the alternative medicine is economic but more dangerous and harmful for you and you children think good what medicine is better.



1 comentario:

  1. Camilo, these are the corrections of your work:

    Alternative medicine is different to traditional medicine, however people prefer traditonal medicine because it has a lot of things that alternative medicine does not.

    Alternative medicine works with charlatans because the doctors are not certified,it can be very economic, but is more dangerous and harmful, however if you need something faster but unpatented it is your decision and your children. As a result of this medicine a lot of people say that alternative medicine is very harmful and durable for your body and also they have to go to the traditional medicine to repair the error of the alternative medicine.

    Traditional medicine is more expensive than alternative medicine, but it is more recommendable and has certified doctors,it is cleaner and more secure than alternative medicine, it has insurance for your comfort and credibility. As a consequence of alternative medicine, traditional medicine has failures provoked by the charlatans of alternative medicine. If you don't trust in alternative medicine, you can in traditional.

    Traditional is better than alternative medicine, because it has certified doctors and the alternative has charlatans. The alternative has a precarious condition and traditional is clean and safe. If you have a problem with traditional medicine you can have an insurance, but if you select the alternative and you have a problem the problem is yours.

    People say that the alternative is good but sometimes it makes problems to your health. Other people say that traditional medicine is expensive, it can be expensive but more secure and better to your health.

    Traditional medicine is more expensive but better and safer and the alternative medicine is economic but more dangerous and harmful for you and you children. Think well what medicine is better.

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